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Author: The Chronicles of the Virago: Book 1 The Novus
Comment by Michael Bialys — April 20, 2009 @ 8:57 pm
Hi! Sorry i didnt get around to checking earlier!
Comment by Leah:) — May 6, 2009 @ 3:01 am
Got the crit on WDW chapter 2. Most helpful–thanks! Wasn’t sure about the last part of the crit, though–did you mean you liked or didn’t like the chapter close?
Comment by darktotem — June 9, 2009 @ 2:31 am
I had to turn the page. There was no question of it. The problem was it did feel a bit sudden.
Comment by uninvoked — June 9, 2009 @ 5:06 am
I have slightly re-written the ending of WDW chapter 2, and the chapter itself. But the end of the chapter and scene is still sudden disaster. If it makes readers turn the page, however, mission accomplished. Thanks again. Oh, and thanks for adding me to your Blogroll, too.
Comment by darktotem — June 9, 2009 @ 10:54 am
Also, would you mind if we used email to send stuff to each other to read and crit? I’m re-editing the WDW chapters I have posted, and I believe you said you had something else you were working on you’d rather had critted, rather than your current posts.
Comment by darktotem — June 9, 2009 @ 9:24 pm
Написано конечно всё правильно, хотя и только поверхностно. В любом случае спасибо
Comment by s-postal.ru — July 2, 2010 @ 4:37 pm
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